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「英文作文進階」範文 1: [2003/8/29]
我的「英文作文進階」庫存書由於其內含有可資判別遭到盜印的證據,因此不能出售。不少讀者因買不到而覺得若有所憾。其實這本書內容跟「英文作文入門」差別不大,只有在範文部份有些「稍微不同」的寫法而已。「進階」的文句我「故意」寫得比較長一點以便向(手上有「作文入門」這本書的)讀者示範一些句型擴大(或是加入「廢話」以拉長文章)的方法。 由於這書不賣,所以我曾答應讀者將其範文貼在「顏子專欄」供讀者參閱,此外,我本來也有計劃為程度較不那麼好的讀者改寫「入門」使之成為更簡易的「入門書」,所以有些篇章,我也有做了刪減。現在我就先在下面貼上第一篇的「進階」中的「(囉嗦)版」及規劃好卻未出版的「簡易」篇,有「入門」此書的讀者不妨對照看看:

一、87年日大英文作文

「請以Saying "Thank you "and "I'm sorry" frequently will make you a happier person為起始句,寫一篇約一百二十個單字的英文作文。

參考範文1:

Saying "Thank you" and "I'm sorry" frequently will make you a happier person. We all know that civility and courtesy can do a lot towards improving one’s relationship with others. In fact, they are the necessary lubricant required for smooth interaction with people. Learning to appreciate people’s kindness to you and apologize for the inconvenience you cause them is very important to you. It can mean the difference between getting free help from people frequently and stumbling over blocks people put up for you from time to time. Psychologists say that all relationships are reciprocal. If you treat people nicely, they will do the same to you in return. If you treat them badly, they will make life difficult for you and you will end up a miserable person.

最簡易的版本則可以如下「精簡」:

Saying "Thank you" and "I'm sorry" frequently will make you a happier person. We all know that civility and courtesy can do a lot towards improving one’s relationship with others. Learning to appreciate people’s kindness to you is very important to you. Psychologists say that all relationships are reciprocal. If you treat people nicely, they will do the same to you in return. If you treat them badly, they will make life difficult for you.

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